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(My name is yung wi chin and this’s the story of my journey along with my two sisters shi pai chin and minh shai chin. Most of our culture’s children often lived not just with their parents, but also with their grandparents, their aunts and uncles, and their cousins. We were the exceptions since our family wasn’t very fortunate. With no grandparents and our father dying in protection of our household, when our mother died we were orphans. )
(As triplets being orphaned while all at the age of 18, we found ourselves looking for a job. We all worked for the same master on the eastern bank of the yang-tse river where there are fertile farming lands. The girls found themselves as house slaves to the rich master. Most ancient Chinese people were avid field workers just as I. The master gives us our healthy servings of our favorite dish and we love it! We can’t wait for our delectable bowl of rice topped with soy beans cucumbers and oranges! It’s so delicious! We were living the good life but one day we decided to see what else is out there and therefore after elaborate planning we gathered supplies and took a journey.)
(We decided to take supplies from our favorite hobby, we love painting characters in our language to communicate with each other. We also brought the thing that we value most in our household. We value our Buddha statue that shi pai chin brought along with us. It represents our religion and also since we do not have a shrine to our ancestors, which was custom for the Buddhist religion, it helps us remember them because we believe when they die they look over our family.)
The day we arrived at a strange area called the Indus river valley, we found ourselves near what seemed to be a very developed town called Harappa. The city from outside was a glorious master piece! These people really know how to decorate! We noticed the high brick walls around the city and began to wonder if we were welcome there. Luckily, our nation had not been in a confrontation with these western Asians. We noticed the natives speaking a very strange language to us that only shai pai chin could speak as we got closer to the city (shouldn't have given her the map...). We our about to enter the city but we considered it good to send you this letter and let you know where we were and how we were doing. From the triplets, 9/5/2300 B.C.E.)
Hello again master, we have walked into the city and we noticed some very interesting things about this culture and we were told what the language was in the area that they all spoke “Harappan” and shared the religion of Hinduism, Buddhism, Islam. Did you know that Buddhism our main religion began from them?? They must’ve been way before us because without them we wouldn’t have any religion! Just checking in, The triplets 9/6/230 PICTURE CITES http://www.hermetics.org/images/aHarappaWalls.jpg
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Ancient China
Arrival at the Harappan Civilization
兩個母版宋,
我們來到了一個奇怪的區域稱為梧桐河山谷的一天我們發現自己什麼似乎是一個名叫 的非常發達的鎮附近。 從以外的城市是光榮的主片 ！ 這些人真知道如何裝飾 ！ 我們注意到在城市高磚牆，開始不知道是否我們有了歡迎。 幸運的是，我們的國家並不是在與這些西方的亞洲人的對抗。 我們注意到當地人說很奇怪的語言向我們這唯一的血塞排下巴能講，我們更接近于城市 （不應該有給她 … … 的地圖）。 我們我們即將進入這座城市，但我們認為好向您發送這封信，讓您知道我們到哪兒，我們做得怎麼樣。
從該的三胞胎
9/5/2300 B.C.E.
(To master Sung,
The day we arrived at a strange area called the Indus river valley, we found ourselves near what seemed to be a very developed town called Harappa. The city from outside was a glorious master piece! These people really know how to decorate! We noticed the high brick walls around the city and began to wonder if we were welcome there. Luckily, our nation had not been in a confrontation with these western Asians. We noticed the natives speaking a very strange language to us that only shai pai chin could speak as we got closer to the city (shouldn't have given her the map...). We our about to enter the city but we considered it good to send you this letter and let you know where we were and how we were doing.
From the triplets,
9/5/2300 B.C.E.)
以主宋,
你好再次主、 我們已走進這座城市和我們注意到一些很有趣的事情，這種文化有關的告訴我們什麼語言是該地區他們都說和共用印度教佛教，伊斯蘭宗教。 你知道佛教我們主要宗教從他們開始 因為沒有他們，我們就不會有任何宗教，他們必須已經是擺在我們面前的方式 ！
只檢查中的三胞胎
9/6/2300
To master Sung,
Hello again master, we have walked into the city and we noticed some very interesting things about this culture and we were told what the language was in the area that they all spoke “Harappan” and shared the religion of Hinduism, Buddhism, Islam. Did you know that Buddhism our main religion began from them?? They must’ve been way before us because without them we wouldn’t have any religion!
Just checking in, The triplets 9/6/230
PICTURE CITES
http://www.hermetics.org/images/aHarappaWalls.jpg
http://www.mysteriousworld.com/Content/Images/Journal/2003/Autumn/Osiria/NimrodMightyHunterImage240.jpg
http://ravidatar0.tripod.com/Image3.gif
http://liology.files.wordpress.com/2009/12/ancient-chinese-mask.jpg
http://history.cultural-china.com/chinaWH/upload/upfiles/2009-03/31/top_ten_ceos_in_ancient_china06f5bb5d1ac7de517dcc.jpg
http://11thhouraction.com/files/images/gm-rice-h-i-001.jpg
http://www.csmonitor.com/var/ezflow_site/storage/images/media/images/0602-sticky-rice-mortar/8053787-1-eng-US/0602-sticky-rice-mortar_full_600.jpg
WORK CITED
www.historyforkids.org
history-world.org
www.indusrivervalley.com
http://www.shsu.edu/~his_ncp/Iraq.html
http://www.dl.ket.org/humanities/connections/class/ancient/mesop.htm
http://www.livius.org/men-mh/mesopotamia/mesopotamia.html
http://www.historylink101.com/ancient_mesopotamia.htm
(the one above you have to click on the yellow bars to take you to the information)
http://mesopotamia.lib.uchicago.edu/mesopotamialife/index.php
http://www.crystalinks.com/mesopotamia.html